Jonathan wants a more abrupt change into the middle section and some more noticeable sounds to play off of in the scary parts, so that’s what I’ve done in this version. If this is not the final version, I am sure that it is at least 95% of the way done.
Oh yeah, and Happy New Year! I hope 2010 is full of clarity and love for you, for us all.
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Rock ON! Whole balloon crew audience approved wholeheartedly.
Thanks for the changes, well done. Yeay!
Love it.
Hey, Daniel
I finally found your site, enjoyed “Possibility” very much. I’d love to hear more!
Also wanted to send you a poem since you asked. I’ve been working with a poetry form that always opens with a question. Here’s a newish one below.
Hey, I hope you’ll make it to Mimi’s b-day party.
Vaya con Dios.
Daniel Ari
***
Will you rub my head?
Your caresses feel
like we’re unburdened
nesting animals,
two warm, empty hides.
There is nothing else
but the rainy sound
the hair on my scalp
makes under your hand.
Was there once a world
of fewer concerns
where we’d live to sense
under a hundred
things in existence?
Your touch may be all
I’ll know of essence,
peaceful while it lasts.
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